Nature Has the Write of Way (second draft, title change)
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Thanks for your feedback, WJ. I see what you mean about the fishing hook at the beginning... I'll figure something out for that one. And I should have been more specific, yes, I meant the hunter to use the feather as a quill. I'll use your suggestions, thanks Smile
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