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Coming of Age, Again (Give an Inch) edit #4.1

Coming of Age, Again (Give an Inch) edit #4.1
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09-20-2015, 12:28 AM
(09-19-2015, 11:53 PM)Qdeathstar Wrote:  Why not "Coming Of Age"

This poem reminds me of a coming of age story, just coming of an older age.
Good idea, I'll try going in that direction. Thanks Smile

New edit: L12: I can't decide between "with no" and "without".
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RE: Silver Sonnet - by Erthona - 01-23-2014, 12:26 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by ellajam - 01-23-2014, 01:00 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 01-23-2014, 01:20 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by ellajam - 01-23-2014, 01:49 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by milo - 01-23-2014, 02:41 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by Dru Flores - 01-23-2014, 02:00 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by ellajam - 01-23-2014, 07:28 PM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by Leanne - 01-23-2014, 04:15 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by ThePinsir - 01-23-2014, 05:21 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by ellajam - 01-23-2014, 05:53 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by milo - 01-24-2014, 11:34 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by ellajam - 01-24-2014, 07:14 PM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by milo - 01-24-2014, 11:30 PM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by ellajam - 01-25-2014, 12:20 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by milo - 01-25-2014, 12:32 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by ellajam - 01-25-2014, 12:58 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by newsclippings - 01-25-2014, 01:10 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet - by ellajam - 01-25-2014, 01:17 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet edit #1 - by ellajam - 01-26-2014, 12:11 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet edit #1 - by milo - 01-26-2014, 12:15 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet edit #1 - by ellajam - 01-26-2014, 12:33 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet edit #1 - by milo - 01-26-2014, 12:36 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet edit #1 - by ellajam - 01-26-2014, 10:51 PM
RE: Silver Sonnet edit #1 - by abu nuwas - 01-28-2014, 08:26 AM
RE: Silver Sonnet edit #1 - by ellajam - 01-28-2014, 09:53 AM
RE: Silver and Bold edit #1 - by milo - 01-28-2014, 10:15 AM
RE: Silver and Bold edit #1 - by ellajam - 01-28-2014, 11:14 AM
RE: Silver and Bold edit #1 - by milo - 01-28-2014, 11:29 AM
RE: Silver and Bold edit #1 - by trueenigma - 01-28-2014, 10:53 AM
RE: Silver and Bold edit #1 - by ellajam - 01-28-2014, 12:02 PM
RE: Silver and Bold edit #1 - by trueenigma - 01-28-2014, 03:04 PM
RE: Silver and Bold edit #1 - by justcloudy - 01-28-2014, 07:27 PM
RE: Silver and Bold edit #1 - by ellajam - 01-28-2014, 07:46 PM
RE: Give an Inch...edit #4 - by ellajam - 09-17-2015, 11:01 AM
RE: Give an Inch...edit #4 - by milo - 09-17-2015, 12:54 PM
RE: Give an Inch...edit #4 - by ellajam - 09-19-2015, 10:42 PM
RE: Give an Inch...edit #4 - by QDeathstar - 09-19-2015, 10:54 PM
RE: Give an Inch...edit #4 - by ellajam - 09-19-2015, 11:16 PM
RE: Give an Inch...edit #4 - by QDeathstar - 09-19-2015, 11:53 PM
RE: Give an Inch...edit #4 - by ellajam - 09-20-2015, 12:28 AM



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