Birches bend and shed their bark, but should they bend for me?

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This is very interesting, I enjoy your style. I think the rhythm is great, but shakey in parts, particularly in the second paragraph. I think that's the only one that needs a little bit of work though, the rest flows nicely.

The last line is fantastic, and really brings the piece together for me. Is that the line you formed the poem around?

Good job! Keep writing, you're a great poet