09-17-2015, 03:58 PM
some people's critique of the poem may be harsh, it's a workshop, try and focus on the poem and not other members feedback; i'm sure the poets is capable of doing that themselves. mod
(09-17-2015, 02:48 PM)toinfinity Wrote: I really enjoyed this, and although I think the edit is improved, I think some peoples critiques of it are a little harsh.
A nimble wind is great! Why does it have to make literal sense? I don't think it needs to, just visual sense. It conjures up an image of the wind through the pirates eyes, as a source of adventure.
I don't have much to say on this other than I really liked it, and I think you're a good writer.