09-17-2015, 02:48 PM
I really enjoyed this, and although I think the edit is improved, I think some peoples critiques of it are a little harsh.
A nimble wind is great! Why does it have to make literal sense? I don't think it needs to, just visual sense. It conjures up an image of the wind through the pirates eyes, as a source of adventure.
I don't have much to say on this other than I really liked it, and I think you're a good writer.
A nimble wind is great! Why does it have to make literal sense? I don't think it needs to, just visual sense. It conjures up an image of the wind through the pirates eyes, as a source of adventure.
I don't have much to say on this other than I really liked it, and I think you're a good writer.