09-17-2015, 09:12 AM
Hello 71--
See in-line please:
I heard she grew up to marryOK we have two characters, NAR + a women
a short glass of white milk kind of guy,vs chocolate milk kinda guy?
but back then she was in my arms:so, she's N's ex
pink tulip skin, edible nipplescool color for skin. edible nipples siunds nice, but who eats nipples, lick & kiss maybe
She would rub her curls against my neck,subtle
slurp small beads of sweat from my nose"slurp" is definitely the wrong word
When words failed us,
we spoke only in vowels:like it !
ahhh, you
ohhh, youOK
The Moody Blues had nothing
we never heard beforesorta thuds for me at the end, I'm afraid. Introduce Zappa here, maybe: "cover that girl in chocolate syrup/do a nasty on the White House lawn" (F.Zappa)
I would build around speaking in vowels and lose most of the rest. For ideas Google ee cummings "She Being Brand New"
... Mark
See in-line please:
I heard she grew up to marryOK we have two characters, NAR + a women
a short glass of white milk kind of guy,vs chocolate milk kinda guy?
but back then she was in my arms:so, she's N's ex
pink tulip skin, edible nipplescool color for skin. edible nipples siunds nice, but who eats nipples, lick & kiss maybe
She would rub her curls against my neck,subtle
slurp small beads of sweat from my nose"slurp" is definitely the wrong word
When words failed us,
we spoke only in vowels:like it !
ahhh, you
ohhh, youOK
The Moody Blues had nothing
we never heard beforesorta thuds for me at the end, I'm afraid. Introduce Zappa here, maybe: "cover that girl in chocolate syrup/do a nasty on the White House lawn" (F.Zappa)
I would build around speaking in vowels and lose most of the rest. For ideas Google ee cummings "She Being Brand New"
... Mark