09-16-2015, 03:23 AM
Hey John-
The shorter, the harder, is so true. Every word counts... I'm sure that a two word poem, like "I AM" could have several interpretations
And yes, after 60 years on this planet I do need to get around to writing about my b'day falling on the 1st day of fall... maybe something about candles losing their leaves.
...Mark
The shorter, the harder, is so true. Every word counts... I'm sure that a two word poem, like "I AM" could have several interpretations
And yes, after 60 years on this planet I do need to get around to writing about my b'day falling on the 1st day of fall... maybe something about candles losing their leaves.
...Mark
(09-16-2015, 02:40 AM)John Wrote: Thanks for the further input. It's interesting how people read it differently: my intention was that the high spring tides in September (often with gales) results in foamy seas. These then wash the mermaid's hair. It's not that the seas 'foam and wash...' i.e. her hair was foamed.
Perhaps I need, Seas foam, and wash... etc. So much to say in so few words!
Cheers again.
(09-15-2015, 11:22 PM)Mark A Becker Wrote: ... Being born on the autumnal equinox, I am always aware of its approach, but have yet to write a poem about it...Off you go, then.
... Mark