09-16-2015, 02:09 AM
(09-15-2015, 11:22 PM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Hey John- Trying to describe those foaming seas without using the word "foam" would be a challenge. (Just sayin) Being born on the autumnal equinox, I am always aware of its approach, but have yet to write a poem about it...Hey John. I don't have a real issue with it as is but I wonder if "lather" might help resolve the potential clunk or cliche expressed by some readers.
... Mark
(09-15-2015, 08:58 PM)John Wrote: Thanks for the input, peeps. September equinoxial tides and south-easterlies make for some foaming seas where we are. Going to try a couple of hours in the bay this afternoon.
Paul