An Empty Vessle, or a Broken Sea

[Lloyd E Dixon]

It's a work in progress. Thank you for the input. Noticed the misspelled "vessel" after post. I plan on making revisions, and hopefully get your input again. Thanks, again. I may change the past/present/future tense, but I'm not suelre how yet, and I kind of want to be more discriptive, but the may just be the part of me that likes to lay it on the table. Anymore information or ideas are helpful.