Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1)

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Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1)

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09-12-2015, 03:34 AM

Edit posted. I have stolen a bit from each of you, humbly grateful. I'm not sure about losing "close space" or about the title (I considered Snap, Crackle, Plop Hysterical

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Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1) - by ellajam - 07-25-2015, 08:48 PM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by cidermaid - 07-25-2015, 11:04 PM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by ellajam - 07-25-2015, 11:49 PM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by cidermaid - 07-26-2015, 12:38 AM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by ellajam - 07-26-2015, 12:42 AM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by Brownlie - 07-26-2015, 09:36 AM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by ellajam - 07-26-2015, 01:35 PM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by Grace - 07-27-2015, 08:01 AM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by ellajam - 07-27-2015, 08:42 AM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by Wjames - 07-30-2015, 11:54 AM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by ellajam - 07-30-2015, 07:12 PM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by John - 07-30-2015, 07:40 PM

RE: Cause and Effect or Coincidence - by ellajam - 07-30-2015, 07:57 PM

RE: Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1) - by ellajam - 09-12-2015, 03:34 AM

RE: Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1) - by Grace - 09-13-2015, 01:24 PM

RE: Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1) - by ellajam - 09-13-2015, 01:47 PM

RE: Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1) - by peacejazzspirit - 09-12-2015, 09:18 AM

RE: Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1) - by ellajam - 09-12-2015, 09:23 AM

RE: Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1) - by peacejazzspirit - 09-12-2015, 09:40 AM

RE: Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1) - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 09-13-2015, 02:21 PM

RE: Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1) - by ellajam - 09-13-2015, 03:13 PM

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