Genevieve Went Down to Ask Him Why
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(09-08-2015, 08:23 AM)crow Wrote:  Ray—I was talking about the Grand Canyon in example 3. And w the tangerine, he's reading his own notes about how excellent it tasted, and is saying they seem idolatrous or something 

Thanks for filling those in.

But I NAILED the Genevieve/Todd thing!!! Thumbsup  Thumbsup  Smile

When I listen to you read it out loud -- actually it's a performance, not just a reading -- it sounds
much better than when I read it on the page. Poetry (but not all) usually does.
Lyrics, well, that's what they're designed to do.

ray
                                                                                                                                all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?
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Genevieve Went Down to Ask Him Why - by crow - 08-31-2015, 12:27 AM
RE: Genevieve Went Down to Ask Him Why - by crow - 09-08-2015, 08:23 AM
RE: Genevieve Went Down to Ask Him Why - by rayheinrich - 09-08-2015, 10:18 PM



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