09-08-2015, 02:18 PM
Hello JasonontheOcean,
First of all a big thank you for your comments, I am really surprised and shocked (in a good way) to see your analysis and the depth with which you have analyzed the meaning and sounds of this piece. Really, I feel so happy that you spent so much of time and spared so much of thought on this one.
To tell you the truth, I never thought so much about the sounds while writing, English is not my mother tongue and have studied English only till High School. Your comments made me want to study the language and literature some more and learn about the things that you have mentioned. I will try to incorporate your suggestions in this piece and in all my future writing.
Thank you so much,
Neena.
First of all a big thank you for your comments, I am really surprised and shocked (in a good way) to see your analysis and the depth with which you have analyzed the meaning and sounds of this piece. Really, I feel so happy that you spent so much of time and spared so much of thought on this one.
To tell you the truth, I never thought so much about the sounds while writing, English is not my mother tongue and have studied English only till High School. Your comments made me want to study the language and literature some more and learn about the things that you have mentioned. I will try to incorporate your suggestions in this piece and in all my future writing.
Thank you so much,
Neena.
~Neena