09-07-2015, 01:38 AM
(08-24-2015, 08:30 AM)ellajam Wrote: I love your poem with that pic, the eyes could be laughing or desirous or both.
Much enjoyed, worth the wait.
She was trying to smile while looking up into a bright sky.
But, yes, it looked that way to me as well. Why I chose it.
I'm happy it found you at just that moment.
(08-24-2015, 01:06 PM)just mercedes Wrote: Warm and intimate and sexy - what's not to love? The second stanza is full of texture ...
and something rarer, heart-felt appreciation of the physical fact of a woman ...
I showed my wife your comment and I said: "See!". She said: "Well, I guess that's
why they call it writing". All I know about sarcasm, I've learned from her. She actually
liked the poem, but commented: "You never get tired of your old girlfriends, do you?"
and I said: "But I used your picture" -- My wife is the most physically factual woman in the universe.
And thank you, you've given me one of the best compliments I've ever received.
(08-24-2015, 05:31 PM)billy Wrote: nice tits
You men are all alike.
(08-25-2015, 02:30 AM)John Wrote: Unlike the poor lass at the Lido in Paris. Every dancer about 32A, and one big lass
at 44DD. Nearly knocked me out.
Lovely poem.
You men are even more alike.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions