09-05-2015, 08:35 PM
Hi, abu. 
Whittling away does not leave no adornment, there's plenty of room for beautiful language. It's not that nothing is left, it's just finely focused.
I love that your example uses "still", I've fought for that word myself here, it has a wonderful turn to it, and is full of secrets and songs.
Whittling away does not leave no adornment, there's plenty of room for beautiful language. It's not that nothing is left, it's just finely focused.
I love that your example uses "still", I've fought for that word myself here, it has a wonderful turn to it, and is full of secrets and songs.
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