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Fairy-tales
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09-03-2015, 01:04 PM
I really like the idea of this poem. I really like the rhythm that I has, well, could have after a couple revisions imo. I feel like the meter could be a little better.. Same with the word choice. I didn't really understand the word steal until the very end, which I think it's only appropriate if you actually stolen and ended up in jail.. But I love the rhyme scheme and I love the symbolism, it's awesome work and I can tell it came from the heart.
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RE: Fairy-tales - by peacejazzspirit - 08-23-2015, 11:52 AM
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RE: Fairy-tales - by QDeathstar - 09-01-2015, 12:44 PM
RE: Fairy-tales - by thewatson - 09-03-2015, 01:04 PM
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