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08-30-2015, 03:45 PM

Thanks for reading guys. I agree with your thoughts Ella, I'll definitely cut "the", and I'll try and work on the last stanza. Sorry for the late response, I've been out of town, living out this poem the last little while.

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RE: Simple - by Mark A Becker - 08-15-2015, 04:37 AM

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RE: Simple - by Volaticus - 08-24-2015, 12:42 PM

RE: Simple - by ellajam - 08-24-2015, 08:11 PM

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