Reading with Bifocals (Revision 4)

Reading with Bifocals (Revision 4)

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#15

08-28-2015, 12:40 AM

Also Quix, love the economy of your new line 1. That was a good amount of edit suggestions that play well with the tone of the flavor of the piece. I might take them as the stand, which I rarely do. I'll be thinking about it.

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Todd

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Reading with Bifocals (Revision 4) - by Todd - 08-24-2015, 01:42 PM

RE: Bifocals - by tectak - 08-24-2015, 04:42 PM

RE: Bifocals - by billy - 08-24-2015, 05:40 PM

RE: Bifocals - by Mark A Becker - 08-25-2015, 01:05 AM

RE: Bifocals - by Todd - 08-25-2015, 02:27 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision) - by Todd - 08-25-2015, 05:25 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision) - by tectak - 08-25-2015, 07:34 PM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision) - by Todd - 08-25-2015, 11:18 PM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision) - by tectak - 08-26-2015, 01:23 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision) - by Todd - 08-26-2015, 01:26 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision) - by Quixilated - 08-27-2015, 12:58 PM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision) - by billy - 08-27-2015, 03:58 PM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision) - by billy - 08-27-2015, 03:59 PM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision) - by Todd - 08-28-2015, 12:38 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision) - by Todd - 08-28-2015, 12:40 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision 2) - by ChristopherSea - 08-28-2015, 01:42 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision 2) - by Todd - 08-28-2015, 04:17 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision 2.1) - by Quixilated - 08-28-2015, 05:35 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision 2.1) - by ChristopherSea - 08-28-2015, 07:59 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision 2.1) - by Quixilated - 08-28-2015, 09:51 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision 2.1) - by ChristopherSea - 08-28-2015, 10:55 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision 3) - by Todd - 03-18-2017, 04:03 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision 3) - by Lizzie - 03-21-2017, 03:01 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision 3) - by Todd - 03-21-2017, 06:03 AM

RE: Reading with Bifocals (Revision 4) - by Todd - 03-21-2017, 06:41 AM

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