Reading with Bifocals (Revision 4)

[tectak]

I see your point on the foot/faucet I'll give it some thought. You know, I saw that the last part wasn't a sentence when I killed the being verb than I went off to fix something else and didn't think of it again. Stupid short term memory, I'll fix that while I consider your other point.

To your other statement, Tom. I still see the core of it, but maybe its more changed than I think. Revision two steps forward, a skip and a stumble back.

Thanks,

Todd

Hi Todd,
It is the "absoluteness" of that beautiful sentence "What started with sound has ended has ended with motion" that I most miss. I seemed to me to so encapsulating and end-suited that I almost breathed out a gestaltalation (and if that ain't a word it should be)
Core metaphors are one thing but nothing beats a germane ending...proof here the way I see it. Others may (will) disagree.
We shall see.
Best,
tectak