Reading with Bifocals (Revision 4)

[Todd]

I see your point on the foot/faucet I'll give it some thought. You know, I saw that the last part wasn't a sentence when I killed the being verb than I went off to fix something else and didn't think of it again. Stupid short term memory, I'll fix that while I consider your other point.

To your other statement, Tom. I still see the core of it, but maybe its more changed than I think. Revision two steps forward, a skip and a stumble back.

Thanks,

Todd