08-24-2015, 05:40 PM
(08-24-2015, 01:42 PM)Todd Wrote: What started with soundnot much to do with this one, i like the title a lot, [for me] it hints at gran or gramps looking through the top half of their glasses, watching kids growing up. and as such creates a good image with a single word. no suggestions as to how but i'd like to see a bit more
has ended in motion.
The words are hyperactive
children mainlining sugar;
tiny cockroaches scurrying
into the cold darkness
of middle age.
