08-23-2015, 11:52 AM
(08-23-2015, 09:24 AM)Misanthrope Wrote: I actually like both of your suggestions. xD I don't think I want broader word choice though... The child-like feel of it wouldn't quite feel right worth more expansive vocabulary. I'll mess with it. Thank you!I understand what you mean, and glad my contribution was of help.
Free verse poetry and jazz are like brother and sister.

