"Some Enchanted Evening" edit 1.0 markabec
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quote='Mark A Becker' pid='195804' dateline='1440099218']
Hey Tom- I re-inserted the Silver Cord, by addition, below:

Tears that crawl upon my cheek are
colder than my skin and taste new to me
now. Before, as music played, I felt
no deep regrets, no heightened states.

Why now, when music plays, do I find
emotion's seat?  Those thoughts I thought
were dead, at this late hour, are all there
saved and salted in my mind.

I smile through strange new tears
of half-formed dreams, and see now
how the Silver Cord, will soon enough
be severed from my mortal form.


“Some enchanted evening”
I will sink into my chair of dreams,
and open up the locks, and out will pour
the raw emotions of the person

I have been, yet never truly was.
How can it be that music moved
my days a long, but all I ever was
became an old, old song?


(hope not outta line)
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RE: "Some Enchanted Evening" - by Mark A Becker - 08-21-2015, 12:29 AM
RE: "Some Enchanted Evening" - by Mark A Becker - 08-21-2015, 04:33 AM
RE: "Some Enchanted Evening" - by tectak - 08-21-2015, 08:58 PM
RE: "Some Enchanted Evening" - by Mark A Becker - 08-21-2015, 11:42 PM
RE: "Some Enchanted Evening" - by Mark A Becker - 08-22-2015, 06:34 AM
RE: "Some Enchanted Evening" - by tectak - 08-22-2015, 06:54 AM
RE: "Some Enchanted Evening" - by Mark A Becker - 08-22-2015, 07:35 AM
RE: "Some Enchanted Evening" - by tectak - 08-22-2015, 03:46 PM



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