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08-21-2015, 11:00 PM

Cheers on the ideas, everyone! I'll get to editing promptly.

A quick question: I've been struggling with the second line of the final stanza. Do you believe that removing it takes anything from the piece?

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Morning - by MattVoscinar - 08-21-2015, 01:03 PM

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