08-21-2015, 12:29 AM
Hey Tom-
Sounds like you are starting to be you again, and I mean that in a good way.
One gut reaction is that I can easily relate to is your age and mine being very close, so I know that I'm the "right" audience for this piece. Younger ears will have a very difficult time with the content, but I hope that doesn't stop anyone from offering (actual) critique.
Two reads ain't enough yet for me to offer any serious crit, but I did want to comment so that you know I am considering how best to respond.
Fair enough? Hope so. More later,
... Mark
PS: I did not see the "2010" until after I commented...
Sounds like you are starting to be you again, and I mean that in a good way.
One gut reaction is that I can easily relate to is your age and mine being very close, so I know that I'm the "right" audience for this piece. Younger ears will have a very difficult time with the content, but I hope that doesn't stop anyone from offering (actual) critique.
Two reads ain't enough yet for me to offer any serious crit, but I did want to comment so that you know I am considering how best to respond.
Fair enough? Hope so. More later,
... Mark
PS: I did not see the "2010" until after I commented...