He was last seen…edit0.0000001 john
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I love the word play in this! Could barely say it untangled in my mind and would never dare to attempt it out loud (not a graceful articulator). I reached the end of the first read through only to realize I was so focused on not getting tangled in the words, that I had no idea what actually happens and had to start all over again. Has a sort of wake you up keep you on your toes feel. Just one point of observation, the words are so fun, it sort of seems incongruous to have them spell out such a tragedy. It makes me feel like I was laughing during a funeral. But, guilt aside, it's fantastically fun. Smile
-Quix
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara 
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He was last seen…edit0.0000001 john - by tectak - 08-20-2015, 12:25 AM
RE: He was last seen… - by peacejazzspirit - 08-20-2015, 12:13 PM
RE: He was last seen… - by tectak - 08-20-2015, 04:45 PM
RE: He was last seen… - by tectak - 08-20-2015, 04:49 PM
RE: He was last seen… - by Quixilated - 08-20-2015, 12:24 PM
RE: He was last seen… - by John - 08-20-2015, 04:46 PM



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