08-19-2015, 05:03 AM
Hey 43- Though I'm late in the game, I've been watching from the sidelines...
I'm glad you stuck with the new yorky stuff, as it's in tune...
I guess only God knows why an atheist would get into halo stuffing, and the stanza is probably the best for maintaining the overall tone of the poem.
The poem runs out of gas, drily, but that's fine with me. Poems that run out of gas allow the reader to walk right by without stopping... (did you see that poem?) I'm already halfway down the block (what poem?) Cool effect when used well, and in this case it is...
I guess you consider this one "done", since you said so, so you might as well let it go now. Good job.
NEXT! ....
... Mark
I'm glad you stuck with the new yorky stuff, as it's in tune...
I guess only God knows why an atheist would get into halo stuffing, and the stanza is probably the best for maintaining the overall tone of the poem.
The poem runs out of gas, drily, but that's fine with me. Poems that run out of gas allow the reader to walk right by without stopping... (did you see that poem?) I'm already halfway down the block (what poem?) Cool effect when used well, and in this case it is...
I guess you consider this one "done", since you said so, so you might as well let it go now. Good job.
NEXT! ....
... Mark