Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets
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Big Grin You may want to use the lake line to comment on "an awkward break". If you swapped S2&3 you might get more of the midway twist you need.

Fun read, thanks for posting it.
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Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by John - 08-16-2015, 04:29 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by Leanne - 08-17-2015, 04:51 AM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by billy - 08-17-2015, 08:42 AM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by ellajam - 08-17-2015, 09:33 AM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by John - 08-17-2015, 03:38 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by Leanne - 08-17-2015, 03:54 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by ThePen - 08-17-2015, 04:31 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by John - 08-17-2015, 05:55 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by billy - 08-18-2015, 05:18 PM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by Sharramon - 08-19-2015, 10:12 AM
RE: Sonnet on Questions on Sonnets - by John - 08-19-2015, 08:50 PM



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