On Timeliness

[billy]

it's almost factual enough to be a haiku but in truth [apart form a very small amount of alliteration it hold now real poetic device. for me there's no pay off, no discernible end our juxtaposition. the writing is bad as far as writing goes but for me it needs more to be an out and out poem. one way is to use simile. example:

like cold winters, i am never on time

and metaphor;

the world waits like pebbles in a stream

On Timeliness

I am never on time and nor should you be.
The world waits for those important enough;
it all depends on how you convince yourself
that you are important, and how well at that.