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Simple
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08-14-2015, 01:57 PM
I like what you have here, and it suits the title. There's no hidden agenda, and there's no intricate meaning. The poem just does what it does, and does it well. "So we cooled off in the waves/ of a twenty foot plunge." are my favorite lines. It's a very satisfying ending, I think. This was a pleasant read.
Enjoyed it, CK |
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