Science... take yer pick

[Mark A Becker]

Hello namesake-

Changed title to avoid any concerns.

Also made internal changes to this simple 5-7-5 piece.

Thanks Mark.




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Hi Mark, 

I'll stay out of the 'tense chronology' debate for the moment and say that perhaps it would be best to change the title simply because of the fact of Rudyard Kipling's similarly titled poem albeit without the ellipsis.

I am enjoying the fact that your poem swivels at so many points and offers up a number of different intriguing possibilities, which is a good thing for a short poem.

Thanks for the read,

Mark 
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