Rum (and) Cola

[addy]

Rum-ranked don't need the "ed" puke
tells fresh tales
of anguish.

In the wake,
we neglect
the fly-swarmed muck this verse confused me. at the beginning you said the vomit was telling you "fresh tales of anguish", but in here you imply that the speaker was ignoring the mess completely. Maybe I'm misinterpreting it?

for the weight
of daylight. Kind of like this. You can still put more oomph in it, put some more gravity (no pun intended) into these lines.

Just a bit of editing for me, but still liked it. Very visceral.