08-14-2015, 01:00 AM
Just to say that when you are posting a new version of your poem people would usually edit the original post at the top of the page and put the newest version of the poem first with a subtitle 'version 2' or 'edit 1' and then subtitle the original poem similarly like 'original' and that way it is easy for people to see how the poem has progressed.
It looks a lot better now without the capitalisation, I wasn't thinking that it was off putting at first but you are right, it seems less distracting now. And you are totally right about 'burr' I was being way too picky there when it is very evidently implied what your meaning is and also it's a damn good word and doesn't get used enough, the kind of word that my Granda would use (along with wireless and scullery) and that's good enough for me.
Cheers,
Mark
It looks a lot better now without the capitalisation, I wasn't thinking that it was off putting at first but you are right, it seems less distracting now. And you are totally right about 'burr' I was being way too picky there when it is very evidently implied what your meaning is and also it's a damn good word and doesn't get used enough, the kind of word that my Granda would use (along with wireless and scullery) and that's good enough for me.
Cheers,
Mark
wae aye man ye radgie