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[Cousin Kil]

Oops, sorry, just saw that this is in Mild... oh well... ignore half of it if you like

Haha no way, I appreciate any and all feedback, especially when it's good stuff (which has been the case for pretty much all the critiques I've received on this site).
I especially appreciate the bit about switching around "in the hollow" and "dogs were howling", I think it's stronger the way you put it. Also will be checking into the other word changes and omissions, I really appreciate all the thought!
At least when it comes to my stuff, even if it's in Mild, comment as much as you want! It all really helps.

Thanks,
CK