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[tectak]

Wow tectak, that means A LOT, especially coming from a mod who's got a lot more experience under their belt than I have, I really appreciate all the complements! Also it's interesting you said Easy Rider haha- the first real poem I wrote was inspired by Easy Rider (I was planning on posting it sometime down the line). Found it funny you said that haha. I'll consider changing the i's but to me they feel more personal as small and uncapitalized... I'll have to think on it
Again, thanks for the huge complements!
Cousin Kil

Explained in depth, what you meant about the "I" now makes total sense to me
Made the appropriate changes
Again thanks for everything, I'm here to learn and the giving and receiving of critique has helped a lot in just a matter of days
Many thanks,
CK

Good egg squared,
tectak