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Crumbs revision 1
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08-09-2015, 11:24 AM
I have received a multitude of good critiques, and I appreciate the time everyone spent with the poem. I'm still processing through everyone's comments, and will address them individually soon when I'm ready with the first pass at the revision. You've all given me a lot to consider and think about. I am truly thankful for the help.
Best, Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Crumbs revision 1 - by Todd - 08-07-2015, 05:53 AM
RE: Crumbs - by cjchaffin - 08-07-2015, 08:18 AM
RE: Crumbs - by Mark A Becker - 08-07-2015, 08:47 AM
RE: Crumbs - by milo - 08-07-2015, 10:27 AM
RE: Crumbs - by Quixilated - 08-09-2015, 05:24 AM
RE: Crumbs - by Grace - 08-09-2015, 07:24 AM
RE: Crumbs - by just mercedes - 08-09-2015, 07:47 AM
RE: Crumbs - by Leanne - 08-09-2015, 08:02 AM
RE: Crumbs - by Todd - 08-09-2015, 11:24 AM
RE: Crumbs - by Todd - 08-10-2015, 05:38 AM
RE: Crumbs revision 1 - by Mark A Becker - 08-10-2015, 12:44 PM
RE: Crumbs revision 1 - by Todd - 08-10-2015, 01:10 PM
RE: Crumbs revision 1 - by Todd - 08-10-2015, 05:54 AM
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