08-08-2015, 09:05 AM
Second Revision:
I'm twisted and churning
to expose you my features.
My body of glass
and howling creatures.
A slave to your winds,
your whims are my way.
Although I'm uncertain,
my direction won't change.
You've seen my destruction,
yet you seem unfazed.
Your white diamond smile
soothes my torturous self-blame.
"Created for cleansing",
you claim it's my place.
Your sapphire iris
has pierced through my grey.
I'm thankful, oh Goddess
Who rules o'er this plain
You've seen I shine brightly
in spite of the rain.
Your words are a doldrum
to winds both anxious and confused.
Now make them blow West
and guide me to you.
First Revision:
I am a tornado
reaching to Aether.
Hands made of glass
and howling creatures.
A slave to your winds
Your whims are my way
Although I'm uncertain
My direction won't change
I am surely a danger,
But you seem unfazed.
With canines of diamonds
You spare me your grace.
My lust is for loving
Your reaching my way
Your sapphire iris
Has pierced through my grey
Tell me, oh Goddess
As you rule o'er this plain
Why me you beckon
A product of rain
Your motions permitting
Assuming they're true
Make these winds blow West
and guide me to you
Original:
I am a tornado
But you are my equator
Equal to nothing
And far beyond a savior
My passion's for precious
And constant obsession
My love, it can not be better
I am my own danger
But you are my angel
Blinding and fearless
In beauty I'm tangled
My lust is for loving
And for you mine's endless
My love, we've grown together
Perhaps I'm not hateful
Just learning to love
I was a child
Who questioned too much
And though I am certain
These words aren't enough
My love, I'm still getting better
I'm twisted and churning
to expose you my features.
My body of glass
and howling creatures.
A slave to your winds,
your whims are my way.
Although I'm uncertain,
my direction won't change.
You've seen my destruction,
yet you seem unfazed.
Your white diamond smile
soothes my torturous self-blame.
"Created for cleansing",
you claim it's my place.
Your sapphire iris
has pierced through my grey.
I'm thankful, oh Goddess
Who rules o'er this plain
You've seen I shine brightly
in spite of the rain.
Your words are a doldrum
to winds both anxious and confused.
Now make them blow West
and guide me to you.
First Revision:
I am a tornado
reaching to Aether.
Hands made of glass
and howling creatures.
A slave to your winds
Your whims are my way
Although I'm uncertain
My direction won't change
I am surely a danger,
But you seem unfazed.
With canines of diamonds
You spare me your grace.
My lust is for loving
Your reaching my way
Your sapphire iris
Has pierced through my grey
Tell me, oh Goddess
As you rule o'er this plain
Why me you beckon
A product of rain
Your motions permitting
Assuming they're true
Make these winds blow West
and guide me to you
Original:
I am a tornado
But you are my equator
Equal to nothing
And far beyond a savior
My passion's for precious
And constant obsession
My love, it can not be better
I am my own danger
But you are my angel
Blinding and fearless
In beauty I'm tangled
My lust is for loving
And for you mine's endless
My love, we've grown together
Perhaps I'm not hateful
Just learning to love
I was a child
Who questioned too much
And though I am certain
These words aren't enough
My love, I'm still getting better