Doin Time
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Thanks for readin Brownlie-

The grammar strays a bit intentionally, including the very last line where "I've" would be correct, but "I" is right for this speaker.

I have one called "Senses of Direction" that I won't post because it is written with a pure "redneck dialect" that is written and reads almost like a foreign language: it really only works as a spoken poem.

I was going to do a similar treatment with this one, but backed off so that it would at least be readable when posted. This'uns jes gottin a sprinklin o' sum'at kinda lang'age in 'er...

... Mark
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Doin Time - by Mark A Becker - 08-06-2015, 05:17 AM
RE: Doin Time - by Wjames - 08-06-2015, 09:16 AM
RE: Doin Time - by Mark A Becker - 08-07-2015, 12:48 AM
RE: Doin Time - by Brownlie - 08-07-2015, 09:20 PM
RE: Doin Time - by Mark A Becker - 08-07-2015, 10:16 PM
RE: Doin Time - by Brownlie - 08-08-2015, 05:00 AM



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