Bringing down the animal

[NobodyNothing]

Standing by the science block,
that's where it started,
chalk on a blazer's back,
a two handed push,
"What are you looking at? 

Great beginning.  Man you're good at engaging my attention.  Right from the start.

Many thanks for the feedback NN much appreciated, its good to know the opening works

Have you put together a book of poetry yet?  I think you're really good.  You strive for the strange and beautiful.  Even if you only self publish one, it would be cool.