Baggage - (was Reaction)
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I like this one.  I can't help but think there was one more stanza to it yet unwritten.  Like bringing back to "you two" in some way.  Does that make sense? Wanting one more stanza to complete it?  

Maybe I'm wrong. Smile
You can't hate me more than I hate myself.  I win.

"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."

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Baggage - (was Reaction) - by Wjames - 08-05-2015, 02:29 PM
RE: Reaction - by newsclippings - 08-06-2015, 12:08 PM
RE: Reaction - by NobodyNothing - 08-06-2015, 12:38 PM
RE: Reaction - by Mark A Becker - 08-07-2015, 12:56 AM
RE: Reaction - by Wjames - 08-08-2015, 01:35 PM
RE: Baggage - (was Reaction) - by Quixilated - 08-09-2015, 02:03 PM
RE: Baggage - (was Reaction) - by Wjames - 08-11-2015, 03:02 PM



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