Ex-pat. (Julian 194?-2014)
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A bit of a note and a little more smoke-

Excellent examples of internal rhyming within this piece.

Readers take note of how that helps move the poem along...

Done now, before smoke catches fire...
... Mark
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Ex-pat. (Julian 194?-2014) - by tectak - 08-05-2015, 06:58 PM
RE: Ex-pat. (Julian 194?-2014) - by Mark A Becker - 08-06-2015, 01:03 AM
RE: Ex-pat. (Julian 194?-2014) - by tectak - 08-06-2015, 01:07 AM
RE: Ex-pat. (Julian 194?-2014) - by Mark A Becker - 08-06-2015, 01:27 AM



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