08-06-2015, 01:27 AM
A bit of a note and a little more smoke-
Excellent examples of internal rhyming within this piece.
Readers take note of how that helps move the poem along...
Done now, before smoke catches fire...
... Mark
Excellent examples of internal rhyming within this piece.
Readers take note of how that helps move the poem along...
Done now, before smoke catches fire...
... Mark

