Carrion Crown

Carrion Crown

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08-04-2015, 02:33 AM

Hey man, nice shot and very inspired! I do have a suggestion:
'Savannah sand' is not a common pairing and seems more contrived
to make the rhyme. Perhaps, 'land(s)' would serve you better.

See what you think./Chris

My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

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Carrion Crown - by Wjames - 07-30-2015, 07:40 AM

RE: Carrion Crown - by tectak - 07-30-2015, 08:12 AM

RE: Carrion Crown - by Wjames - 07-30-2015, 12:00 PM

RE: Carrion Crown - by John - 07-30-2015, 02:35 PM

RE: Carrion Crown - by Keith - 07-31-2015, 05:13 AM

RE: Carrion Crown - by Wjames - 08-02-2015, 01:02 AM

RE: Carrion Crown - by ChristopherSea - 08-04-2015, 02:33 AM

RE: Carrion Crown - by John - 08-04-2015, 03:29 AM

RE: Carrion Crown - by Wjames - 08-04-2015, 02:32 PM

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