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The Bottomless Pit - Rev. #1
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08-03-2015, 10:22 PM
Many thanks for your constructive comments, tectak. I'm assimilating all I can.
If you think this will work in Fun, no problems in you moving it. Cheers again. 
 A poet who can't make the language sing doesn't start. Hence the shortage of real poems amongst the global planktonic field of duds. - Clive James.
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The Bottomless Pit - Rev. #1 - by John - 08-01-2015, 10:21 PM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by peacejazzspirit - 08-01-2015, 11:58 PM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by Keith - 08-02-2015, 12:35 AM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by John - 08-02-2015, 02:15 AM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by Bunx - 08-02-2015, 03:05 AM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by John - 08-02-2015, 04:06 AM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by siyanide - 08-02-2015, 04:23 AM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by Grace - 08-02-2015, 09:16 AM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by billy - 08-02-2015, 10:04 AM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by Quixilated - 08-02-2015, 10:20 AM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by John - 08-02-2015, 03:42 PM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by ellajam - 08-02-2015, 08:10 PM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by Turtle - 08-03-2015, 01:54 AM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by John - 08-03-2015, 04:24 PM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by tectak - 08-03-2015, 10:03 PM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by John - 08-03-2015, 10:22 PM
RE: The Bottomless Pit - by tectak - 08-03-2015, 10:43 PM
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