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Catch and Release
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08-02-2015, 05:00 AM
First off: nice poem, wjames! I like the metaphor comparing the tackle box to your grandfather's skin--a personal touch that makes the poem more original. In stanza 1, dads needs an apostrophe, stanza 2, grandfathers also needs an apostrophe. I personally think this poem is very nice, and a great way to celebrate your grandfather and all he's accomplished.
Free verse poetry and jazz are like brother and sister.
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Catch and Release - by Wjames - 08-02-2015, 12:53 AM
RE: Catch and Release - by peacejazzspirit - 08-02-2015, 05:00 AM
RE: Catch and Release - by fluorescent.43 - 08-02-2015, 06:33 AM
RE: Catch and Release - by Turtle - 08-03-2015, 05:29 AM
RE: Catch and Release - by Wjames - 08-04-2015, 02:37 PM
RE: Catch and Release - by summermoose - 08-06-2015, 08:29 AM
RE: Catch and Release - by kakashi1090 - 08-08-2015, 04:53 AM
RE: Catch and Release - by Cousin Kil - 08-08-2015, 08:42 AM
RE: Catch and Release - by Wjames - 08-11-2015, 03:32 PM
RE: Catch and Release - by kakashi1090 - 08-12-2015, 03:42 AM
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