The Bottomless Pit

The Bottomless Pit - Rev. #1

siyanide
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08-02-2015, 04:23 AM

Haha. I found it very entertaining. Very innovative. I thought it was all gibberish till the last stanza, which explained everything. But may I suggest thinking of a more relevant title? Unless I'm missing something. But great poetry!

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The Bottomless Pit - Rev. #1 - by John - 08-01-2015, 10:21 PM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by peacejazzspirit - 08-01-2015, 11:58 PM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by Keith - 08-02-2015, 12:35 AM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by John - 08-02-2015, 02:15 AM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by Bunx - 08-02-2015, 03:05 AM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by John - 08-02-2015, 04:06 AM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by siyanide - 08-02-2015, 04:23 AM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by Grace - 08-02-2015, 09:16 AM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by billy - 08-02-2015, 10:04 AM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by Quixilated - 08-02-2015, 10:20 AM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by John - 08-02-2015, 03:42 PM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by ellajam - 08-02-2015, 08:10 PM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by Turtle - 08-03-2015, 01:54 AM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by John - 08-03-2015, 04:24 PM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by tectak - 08-03-2015, 10:03 PM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by John - 08-03-2015, 10:22 PM

RE: The Bottomless Pit - by tectak - 08-03-2015, 10:43 PM

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