Berceuse
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[quote='Mark A Becker' pid='194686' dateline='1438276584']
Hi PJS-

I'm unsure about the comma, as well. Written as a single prose sentence, I believe the comma would be appropriate, but I do tend to "over-comma". Perhaps other grammarians will weigh in.
... Mark

Yes, I believed the comma was appropriate, because if you removed the line spacings, that would be the correct structure.
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Berceuse - by Mark A Becker - 07-30-2015, 11:56 PM
RE: Lullaby - by peacejazzspirit - 07-31-2015, 12:11 AM
RE: Lullaby - by Keith - 07-31-2015, 12:16 AM
RE: Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 07-31-2015, 02:16 AM
RE: Lullaby - by Keith - 07-31-2015, 04:26 AM
RE: Lullaby - by Keith - 07-31-2015, 07:38 AM
RE: Lullaby - by peacejazzspirit - 07-31-2015, 05:07 AM
RE: Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 07-31-2015, 05:44 AM
RE: Lullaby - by peacejazzspirit - 07-31-2015, 06:57 AM
RE: Lullaby - by Magpie - 08-05-2015, 12:55 AM
RE: Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 08-05-2015, 03:35 AM
RE: Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 07-31-2015, 11:15 AM



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