Berceuse

Berceuse

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07-31-2015, 12:11 AM

This poem says a lot in a few words. I did not find any faults, except should there not be a comma at the end of line 2? That way the first stanza reads more naturally.

Free verse poetry and jazz are like brother and sister.

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Berceuse - by Mark A Becker - 07-30-2015, 11:56 PM

RE: Lullaby - by peacejazzspirit - 07-31-2015, 12:11 AM

RE: Lullaby - by Keith - 07-31-2015, 12:16 AM

RE: Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 07-31-2015, 02:16 AM

RE: Lullaby - by Keith - 07-31-2015, 04:26 AM

RE: Lullaby - by Keith - 07-31-2015, 07:38 AM

RE: Lullaby - by peacejazzspirit - 07-31-2015, 05:07 AM

RE: Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 07-31-2015, 05:44 AM

RE: Lullaby - by peacejazzspirit - 07-31-2015, 06:57 AM

RE: Lullaby - by Magpie - 08-05-2015, 12:55 AM

RE: Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 08-05-2015, 03:35 AM

RE: Lullaby - by Mark A Becker - 07-31-2015, 11:15 AM

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