Carrion Crown
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Love the title as a summation of that story.

One last shot seems axiomatic. There can only be one last shot. What about there's time for one more shot ?

Cheers

(07-30-2015, 07:40 AM)Wjames Wrote:  A dentist prowls savannah sand,
he needs to find his plaque;
like bloody gums from shaky hands,
with guns this time, attacks.
 
A lion falls, his jaw destroyed,
there’s time for one last shot;
a camera’s flash preserves his joy,
the lion’s carcass rots.
feedback award A poet who can't make the language sing doesn't start. Hence the shortage of real poems amongst the global planktonic field of duds. - Clive James.
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Carrion Crown - by Wjames - 07-30-2015, 07:40 AM
RE: Carrion Crown - by tectak - 07-30-2015, 08:12 AM
RE: Carrion Crown - by Wjames - 07-30-2015, 12:00 PM
RE: Carrion Crown - by John - 07-30-2015, 02:35 PM
RE: Carrion Crown - by Keith - 07-31-2015, 05:13 AM
RE: Carrion Crown - by Wjames - 08-02-2015, 01:02 AM
RE: Carrion Crown - by ChristopherSea - 08-04-2015, 02:33 AM
RE: Carrion Crown - by John - 08-04-2015, 03:29 AM
RE: Carrion Crown - by Wjames - 08-04-2015, 02:32 PM



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