Buzzcut Silence

Buzzcut Silence

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#10

07-30-2015, 12:00 PM

Just my take, and I'm a new poet so please take my advice with a grain of salt Smile

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When you describe your mind being ironed and becoming vapid, I personally it would make more sense
If you said "Brain electrocuted into mindlessness"

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Buzzcut Silence - by fluorescent.43 - 07-26-2015, 07:27 AM

RE: Pressure is a Privilege - by tectak - 07-27-2015, 12:54 AM

RE: Pressure is a Privilege - by Grace - 07-27-2015, 10:17 AM

RE: Deconstruction - by Quixilated - 07-27-2015, 12:53 PM

RE: Deconstruction - by Animal Riots Activist - 07-28-2015, 02:31 PM

RE: Deconstruction - by tectak - 07-28-2015, 06:29 PM

RE: Deconstruction - by John - 07-28-2015, 05:08 PM

RE: Deconstruction - by fluorescent.43 - 07-29-2015, 02:31 AM

RE: Buzzcut Silence - by fluorescent.43 - 07-29-2015, 10:29 PM

RE: Buzzcut Silence - by joesammsington - 07-30-2015, 12:00 PM

RE: Buzzcut Silence - by Wjames - 08-04-2015, 02:54 PM

RE: Buzzcut Silence - by Turtle - 08-04-2015, 04:23 PM

RE: Buzzcut Silence - by kakashi1090 - 08-08-2015, 05:21 AM

RE: Buzzcut Silence - by fluorescent.43 - 08-19-2015, 03:43 AM

RE: Buzzcut Silence - by ellajam - 08-19-2015, 04:06 AM

RE: Buzzcut Silence - by Mark A Becker - 08-19-2015, 05:03 AM

RE: Buzzcut Silence - by Grace - 08-19-2015, 08:49 AM

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