Cry of Life
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Many thanks for your comments, Leanne. You and tectak have given me an idea where the bedrock is on which to build. Liberating in a way.

I don't think explanations from me are warranted as to what I meant, or what was, for me, simple allusion: I should have said it, and you've both explained that.

All taken on board this leaky vessel.

Many thanks again.  Thumbsup
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Messages In This Thread
Cry of Life - by John - 07-28-2015, 08:48 PM
RE: Cry of Life - by tectak - 07-28-2015, 10:04 PM
RE: Cry of Life - by John - 07-29-2015, 02:58 PM
RE: Cry of Life - by tectak - 07-29-2015, 08:35 PM
RE: Cry of Life - by John - 07-29-2015, 08:43 PM
RE: Cry of Life - by tectak - 07-29-2015, 08:57 PM
RE: Cry of Life - by Leanne - 07-29-2015, 03:23 PM
RE: Cry of Life - by John - 07-29-2015, 04:39 PM
RE: Cry of Life - by billy - 07-29-2015, 06:25 PM
RE: Cry of Life - by John - 07-29-2015, 07:08 PM



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