07-29-2015, 07:14 AM
Thanks Tectak for the helpful-as-ever critique (I searched up 'gonadocentric'--even Google is confused 
). I don't know why I capitalize nothing in my poems... I've always done it that way, for some reason. Hopefully I'm not pulling the English language down because of my awful habits. Either way... the third revision is up... hopefully it improves on the second, however marginally.
). I don't know why I capitalize nothing in my poems... I've always done it that way, for some reason. Hopefully I'm not pulling the English language down because of my awful habits. Either way... the third revision is up... hopefully it improves on the second, however marginally.
like you've been shot (bang bang bang)